Some people opine that these days we have excessive options. I completely agree that there are so many options for people to choose because of several reasons.
Firstly, the rapid technology advancement has increased the number of choices for almost everything, which made people to be lazier. This is because people no longer need to make a lot of efforts in getting something that they want. The rapid technology advancement has ease the process in getting something that people desire. For instance, there are currently a lot of online food delivery services that offer different restaurants and different price range. Because of this, people do not need to do grocery shopping and cooking anymore because they can just order the food easily from those online food delivery services. They just need to choose the restaurants that suit their taste and match their price preferences. As a result, people will become lazier than they were before.
Secondly, the increasing competition during this globalization era has made firms to follow the trend. Corporations then started to produce a product that is currently trending, with their own style and price variation. This has caused the emergence of multiple products for almost every product category. Consequently, people become more consumptive because the choices for products are getting wider. They no longer need to save their money or hold their shopping plan due to their lack of money, because those products are available in different price range. For example, jeans jacket is currently trending in fashion world, and a lot of shopping brands started to produce it. If previously the choices for buying jeans jacket were limited with certain model and price range, nowadays the choices are very wide and can be adjusted to buyers' model and price preferences. This situation has made people to become more consumptive than before.
In conclusion, I completely agree that these days people have excessive options because the rapid technology advancement has increased the number of choices for almost everything, which made people to be lazier. Moreover, the increasing competition during this globalization era has made firms to follow the trend which has caused the emergence of multiple products for almost every product category and has made people to become more consumptive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30026809651 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62550408719 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428954423592 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1985735585 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.052631579 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165976891678 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605374146685 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523629388444 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13130980478 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557479794526 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.