In life, different circumstances can occur, including the bad ones. While some people opine that the best way to deal with them is by accepting them, others believe that struggling to make the situation better is the best option. I completely agree with the latter that striving to change the situation is the best solution when facing difficult circumstances.
Several people think that accepting is the best way to face difficult situations. This is because they believe that by accepting them, people will learn to appreciate what they have, instead of hoping for other things. This will then have positive impact to people's mental health, where people will be happier and less-stressful because they can appreciate what they have. For example, Billy is being paid with low wage. Instead of complaining, Billy chooses to be thankful and appreciate that he still has a job, even though not being paid with the wage that he hopes.
Even though accepting is good, but it does not change the unwanted situations into situations that we hope for. Thus, some people opine that struggling to change difficult situations is better because it will be able to change the unwanted situations into situation that we want. It is better than just accepting, because it will change difficult situations, while only accepting will not. For instance, John is being dissatisfied with his current job position as a salesperson. Thus, he struggles to improve his skills to be able to get another job position. As a result, John finally succeeds to get the position that he wants.
In conclusion, struggling to change difficult situations is better than accepting because striving will make people to get out from difficult situations, while only accepting will not.
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...use it will change difficult situations, while only accepting will not. For insta...
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...result, John finally succeeds to get the position that he wants. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12543554007 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69984709295 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466898954704 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7265133407 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211320525655 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804878562968 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689053851104 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149507239969 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539679927423 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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