In this day and age, certain public believe that choices are available excessively in daily life. I completely agree with this notion since we can make our own choices according to situation and desireness. Such choices are usually made while using transportation, sports and education.
It is necessarily not compulsory of having same choices in our life because it depends upon each individual in accordance to their requirement. While selecting sports, each person have distinct interest and vision, depends upon fitness level not only physically but also mentally strong. However, some sports are not linked with physical involvement so in that case sharp witted personnel can make their career, possible only due to availability of choices. Nowadays, we have unlimited preference in education not only in courses but in selection of educational instituation as well. Furthermore, if students want their degree from foreign, they will get chance to study. To illustrate, many students from the global are making their destination in renowned university just because of alternative choices.
Transportation is another sector in which adequate optional are available, while selecting vehicles. We can travel through roadways, waterways and airways. Mass travelers will not be able to travel in limited seat car so, they can travel in bus which is possible due to elective in choices. Although, we have too many optional sources of transports but airways (aeroplane, air crafts) are comparatively more relaible from the side of security. People will reach in their destination in time, if they shows urgency to visit the places via aeroplane. For instance, a survey shows that majority of employees used their private vehicles rather than public transports to reach the office with in a time.
In conclusion, too many optional choices are available at the present time in every sectors. As a consequence, it helps to end our habit to be dependent in one things like in past. Hence, now we can make comparison and select one which is appropriate for us.
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- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
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- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
...very coin has two faces, similarly, too many option in the life leads towards confusion whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27819548872 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88737468247 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687969924812 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8249933853 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702204095941 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216468234414 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293403849664 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374086542554 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292231857055 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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