Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Infrastructure has been changed a lot compared to old days. Previously there were small building made up of outdated material compare big huge bulding of modern era made up of latest material and technology. Due to this some people believe we need to replace them with the modern one. However, other think that we should keep the ancient building as they have some special value. My opinion is divided between both I think we should keep the outer structure of old buildings and need to renovate from inside.
To commence with, Firstly the one who want to demolish the ancient building believes that these buildings are not up to modern safety standards. Some of them were build way back in 1950 or 1960, and there is higher chance that these type of buildings will caught fire easily or may fall down in any during natural calamities which can result in death of many innocent people. In order to be on safer side as per them we need to replace them. Secondly, they also demand that in place of this not so useful buildings, government need to create a facility after having public opinion, it can be anything For instance:- a park, a recreation center or a community center they need to consult with nearby public and can fulfill there demand accordingly.
On the other hand, a handful of people are against this demolition, according to them these buildings are vintage building and we must need to preserve them in any way just to protect our history. If we destroy all of them, then nothing would be left for younger generation to look around. In addition they believe that every site is equally important to each other and every building tell some story, these stories might motivate other in life and can encourage them to be better in life. These stories also something special in someone life what they never want to forget. And by protecting them we are protecting all the things.
In conclusion, I think we might need to keep outer structure of ancient buildings and need to renovate them from inside. So, that they can meet the minimum standard requirement for building. In this way we can do both things, we can rebuild them and we can safe them from demolishing as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... big huge bulding of modern era made up of latest material and technology. Due to this s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est material and technology. Due to this some people believe we need to replace t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...modern one. However, other think that we should keep the ancient building as they...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'catch'
Suggestion: catch
...hance that these type of buildings will caught fire easily or may fall down in any dur...
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Suggestion: addition,
...r younger generation to look around. In addition they believe that every site is equally...
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Suggestion:
...buildings and need to renovate them from inside. So, that they can meet the minim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6987012987 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43003081368 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3473154599 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.411764706 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304800867188 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110791659822 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735827349711 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197824428904 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911112429837 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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