Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Crime rate has been proliferating at rapid pace. Clans of masses reckon that once an individual commit suicide, they repeat it again. While I completely disagree with this notion. Which I will elaborate with suitable illustration in the following paragraph.
First and Foremost, there few strong reasons why person does not repeat crime. Firstly, some time human do just in anger. Means there could be some nuisance which force you to make crime. So, may be they do with an absent mind. For instance, one of my respected neighbors had injured one young boy when that boy has assaulted one young girl. Secondly, there are chances when they expect justice from legislation but not getting any satisfied punishment to any lawbreaker that movement also people do justice by themselves. If they get satisfied by the government, then they may not commit crime. So, it does not mean that once person commit crime means it is not his tendency to do.
On the contrary, few humans assume that lawbreakers will repeat such a felony again. If a person can break the law once, then he/she can do it again. Because second time you do not have fear. For example, one Times of India survey declared that most criminals have committed more than two crimes. Moreover, due to bad past records they do not get so to fulfill their financial requirement they commit crime again. Whether they can struggle for earning their bread and butter or commit crime. So, there are some hard circumstances when people repeat crime again.
In conclusion, although few opine that criminals repeat their crime, I completely deep that this is just short term anger when person commits crime. Sometimes situations become out of control by humans.
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... law once, then he/she can do it again. Because second time you do not have fear. For e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93079584775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44757290784 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1620801729 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8571428571 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173691679577 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555537081655 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357834206134 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108000333592 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136304480259 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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