It is argued that people doing physical work must be paid equally in comparison with people having high degrees depending on the type of work they do. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that knowledge of that work differentiates both in giving salary.
First of all,I believe that high degrees with effective knowledge are attained with a lot of effort to achieve a better life in future. Even if physical work require skills, experience and accountability, but does not provide fulfillment of life with lot of manpower in that field. While pursuing education leads to satisfaction in life even though it requires high amount of money. For instance, if both are paid equally there will be no one who will think of getting educated and ultimately opt for physical work to earn money for their needs. That's why it is important not be given equal pay as the reason would be their effort to bring betterment in society.
Secondly, getting educated will leads to development in many factors either in the field of medicine or technology. In other words, equal salary will mark no difference because educated people bring development and awareness about the current situations and leads the country to a better path. For instance, in earlier days it was unable to identify a particular disease leading to increase in death toll but because of people with high degrees able to clear this situation. Thus it is cleared that educated people must be paid higher due to their effort for country.
To conclude I strongly believe that payment must be given depending on skills and experience but not equally because their work to the country must be valued.
- Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in countryside What are the problems of this issue What can be done to solve this problem 62
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager, in your letter•Ask for some time off to complete a qualification•Suggest what you will do later at work if you have off time•S 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tes both in giving salary. First of all,I believe that high degrees with effectiv...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... lot of effort to achieve a better life in future. Even if physical work require skills, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...cal work to earn money for their needs. Thats why it is important not be given equal ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ciety. Secondly, getting educated will leads to development in many factors either i...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...h degrees able to clear this situation. Thus it is cleared that educated people must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91814946619 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60440846997 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2177790684 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293434305337 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107132464763 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102191337369 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190004940604 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111372939938 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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