natural environment includes rivers, seas, ocean ,forest and air and mountains... .natural environment is relevant to earth. it is very important for human life because people's lives are dependent on ecosystem and if there are not any items of ecosystem people will die. for example without water or without healthy air ,life will be difficult and impossible. I think natural environment is crucial for people and humans have to preserving environment with some simple actions such as they do not pollute water and air.
one of the simple actions for preserving ecosystem is: having healthy air and water, communities do not have to pollute the air and water. water and air pollutions are important problems because their pollutions have an influence on people health. For against this issues people have to use fewer private cars and government should close many factories that harm to environment for example cars companies or chemical companies. Instead governments can establish new companies that help to preserving nature that work with renewable energy such as wind and sun. They should encourage people and organizations to using these energies.
the most important action for rescue the environment is: using fewer plastic things, because plastic things will stay in natural environment for over 100 years and they will have delay to destroying. So lack of using plastic things is necessary to preserving ecosystem.
in conclusion some people believe that help to preserving the environment is vital and all of communities should help to protecting natural source with use of renewable energy such as wind power and solar power. Also they teach to stop using plastics things.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: johnmathewg
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... power and solar power. Also they teach to stop using plastics things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30483271375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971073648 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4234145716 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254643337367 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963758873068 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939959433185 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167084308134 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502184236742 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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