Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so.Why do you think this is happening?What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
It is a common belief that trying to protect the environment is essential. However, most people do not do anything about it.I will state the reasons for people and the appropriate solutions to increase environmental protection in the following paragraphs
Throughout history human activities have affected the environment around us. Contamination results in the destruction of plants and animals and poses a serious threat to the balance of nature.Many psychologists and experts in the family and community believe that the root of many behaviors and practices should be sought in the family institution. The majority of fathers and mothers do not view environmental issues as a principle, but rather as a coincidence or an accidental reaction. For example, they will not be notified if they do not leave the child in the dumpster. Therefore, in our family and community institution, the prevailing educational perspective does not incorporate the environmental perspective.On the other hand,until the college level is seriously considered, not even one lesson as a teaching topic has been comprehensively presented.
There is no need for strange and difficult actions to protect the environment; any one of us anywhere on this planet, with every language and culture, can contribute to saving our living environment by taking a series of simple, low-cost actions.Make environmental awareness part of our social and cultural structure. The more you know about the complex relationship between living things and the environment, the more effective you can be. Talk to your family and friends about what you know and learn.
Join environmental groups to find friends and interact with them, learn more about environmental issues and the most effective ways to solve them.
In conclusion,I believe the most important reason for environmental pollution is the lack of awareness of how to protect it.Protecting the environment by educating people in families and training centers as well as joining volunteer groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, you know, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50320512821 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2486278902 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5341478787 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.090909091 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158521349674 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613227840297 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472679611814 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923576077207 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549750958791 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.