Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that pupils should not be bombarded with a lot of homework. While there some are strong arguments against the setting of homework. I still believe that homework play a pivotal role in students’ life.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people argue that homework is an unnecessary burden for children. Firstly, there is evidence that homework does nothing to improve educational outcomes. For example, country such as Finland, where school children are not given homework, always on top of international education table and outperform countries where setting homework is the norm. Secondly, children have to cover a lot of ground when they are at school, so after-school time is when they need to blow off some steam. It is recognized that extra activities time are as beneficial as study time in term of brain development.
On the other hand, I support the idea that homework has an important role to play in the schooling of children. First of all, we are living in the fast-changing era, parents are too busy to spend time with children, so homework is a good way to keep children away from using mobile phone or playing video games. Another reason is that, the main benefit of homework is that it encourages independent learning and problem solving, as children have to do their tasks alone with their own pace. Therefore, school children must apply the knowledge that they have learnt from school. From my perspective, it is important for children to develop an independent study habit because this prepares them to work alone as adult.
In conclusion, although homework have some drawbacks, I think that its benefits still outweigh them in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ot be bombarded with a lot of homework. While there some are strong arguments against...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98943661972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70144323951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8115914989 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407750334669 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140791131529 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818761996343 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219631365754 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850760262223 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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