It is irrefutable to say that' school play a phenomenal role in everyone life to becomes successful .presently ,it is argued by some people that subject related to art , music,drama and creative writing will teach in education centre and should be added in school curriculum .this essay agree with this statement because teaching the subject help learners to achieve better grade and it it is a vital for children to study subject in which they are best.
There are innumerable benefits behind these trend .first and format, teaching subject of art, music and the creative writing can lead batter performance in academics. To elaborate it ,many children can only perform their best when they are allowed to choose their favourite subject and they enjoy these classes and school juveniles come more productive .For example,recent study by Cambridge University founder that student who were allowed to choose their favourite in other school subject . Therefore, it will be fruitful for learners in overall development.
Furthermore, prime merits of teaching the subject . secondly, every child is born with different skills and talents. To illustrate it . it is beneficial for them when they are allowed to choose that area in which they are expert this will help them to achieve great success in their life and help them to improve imagination as well free from stress. To cite an example ,Virat Kohli is well known Batsman and this is only possible owing to his parents and teachers allowed him to play cricket . hence,due to choose a favourite field, few people getting success in their life.
In conclusion ,as per my above discussion, it is evident that although,the teaching maths, science and history better for learners to getting better achievement but creative subject is more predominant to become successful while showing their he hidden adtitude.
- Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The team activities can teach more skills for life than other activity which are played alone to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that subjects such as art music drama and creative writing have a bright future Therefore schools should spend more time teaching these subjects To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67110309098 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.099551567 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.363636364 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235731010437 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816755296189 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958398637234 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152798424576 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989561365575 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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