Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Nowadays there is a raging debate in which many people believe that home-schooling is the best form of education for pupil's development while others tend to believe that children must receive a formal education at school. In the below paragraphs I will discuss the merits of both sides and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost, homeschooling has a plethora of advantages the most preponderant one is that children can study at their own pace and the study material is custom-made based on their capabilities and learning ability. Secondly, since the parents know the strengths and weakness of their children it gives an opportunity to help their children to work on their weakness by lending them emotional support. With the advent of the internet even in the remotest corners of the world where schools are not present homeschooling is being provided by the internet. In poor countries of the African continent as per the latest United Nations survey, the majority of children were being homeschooled as it is considered a more suitable form of education for child's development
On the other hand, it is must in this era of globalization to get a formal education in a school where pupils get exposure and a competitive environment which prepares them for the professional front. To elucidate classroom presentations, sports activities and social environment coupled with skilled teachers at schools prove to be grooming ingredients for children at a tender age. Schooling also teaches children to disciplined and become more social. In India, the central government lays additional efforts on the schooling and emphasizes on that every child should be sent to school.
Thus, in my opinion, looking at the different facades the advantages of children going to school definitely outweigh homeschooling as the school provides a better environment for children to be groomed and prepares them for future challenges at professional front.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27652733119 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02953960769 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9130776586 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.1 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38359143094 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141291361929 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886719765053 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245022440817 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680491400242 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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