Your local council is considering closing a sports & leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre is closes
Dear Sir,
I am really disappointed by the news, that the local council is considering sports and leisure centre in order to save money.
As you are know that this is the only sports & leisure centre with in this locality and majority of the community uses this centre for recreational activities as the club is equipped with all the modern facilities like swimming pool, gymnasium, indoor games like table tennis, squash, lawn tennis. All these ammenties are being used by my family and friends to stay fit and healthy. this club also has a ampitheatre which is used for playing movies on the weekend, apart from this centre is also used a place for many social gatherings.
The club plays an important role specially for the older generation who come in the sports and leisure centre to excercise and it helps to stay healthy.
Hence, closure of this centre will have a huge impact on us,as we will no longer be able to do recreational activities and stay healthy.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am really disappointed by the news, th...
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Suggestion: known
... in order to save money. As you are know that this is the only sports & leisure ...
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...ly and friends to stay fit and healthy. this club also has a ampitheatre which is us...
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Suggestion: an
...tay fit and healthy. this club also has a ampitheatre which is used for playing m...
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...sed a place for many social gatherings. The club plays an important role special...
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...excercise and it helps to stay healthy. Hence, closure of this centre will have ...
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...his centre will have a huge impact on us,as we will no longer be able to do recreat...
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...es and stay healthy. Yours sincerely vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, really, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85465116279 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50821764112 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0597435866 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255159480979 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124676168015 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933382308369 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160103665394 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128079983039 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.