Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Education has always played an important role in a child's development. The traditional method is being one of the best ways for brain growth. Let's discuss more schooling. Public schooling is the popular approach to imparting knowledge. This technique has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Ideally, in a school, a child gets to spend time with fellow same age children. They can make friends, learn new things, play together, and progress collectively. They not only debate on studies but also on varied other topics, hence they share information with each other. They participate in several extracurricular activities. As a result, their self-confidence and motivation are built up.
Although benefits are plenty there is certain level of hindrances as well. The biggest drawbacks are child safety, undue competition, lack of individual devotion of time. The learning and grasping capacity of each child differs which is usually not considered in public schooling. The gradings are performed on the basis of same examination pattern that is attended by both weak as well as intelligent children. Hence the burden mounted on students is much more than they can handle.
All said and done home tutoring also has its pros and cons. Homeschooling children have become a trend still followed by a diverse variety of groups all over the world. This concept dates back as far as the times when actual schools, for teachings, did not exist. Returns of homeschooling cannot be overlooked. The prime aids for children learning at home are the dedicated commitment the tutor can provide them. The teachings can be altered as per the needs of each child. The safety of children is ensured. The tutoring schedules can be flexible, for example, some children like to study during daytime while others prefer to learn at nighttime.
But as the welfares are discussed, there are several shortcomings also. A child generally stays with the family for 4-5 years then steps out to public schools to educate. However, if the kids are homeschooled, they might not get exposure to social awareness, effective communication skills, making friends, handling tough circumstances, and sharing.
In conclusion, even though both methods have its own merits and demerits, parents should make important decisions about their children according to their convenience and situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35561497326 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90416798975 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633689839572 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1931155775 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1851851852 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8518518519 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37037037037 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260392834399 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568262864954 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564217395179 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116229829183 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062744244218 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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