It is often argued that technology is a remarkable tool to help people socialize with each other, while others claim that the frequent use of technology actually isolate individuals, as they avoid personal interaction. This essay will analyze both opinions and support the former statement, as many social media networks are used to improve social engagement between people.
Advances in technology transformed our lives, especially in the social interaction aspect of life, as modern society have been relying their relationships on many social media networks. This means that, in such a hectic life, society members have been using these communication tools to interact with their loved ones anywhere and anytime. For example, Facebook and Instagram became a vital line used to connect people around the world, because this online interaction does not rely on anyone’s agenda or necessarily needs to schedule a time and place to happen. Thus, technology has brought people together, because in today’s world, individuals utilize their mobile phones and computer to be in touch with their friends, families and business partners, as it is much easier and convenient, which means it helped people to manage their personal relationships and their daily responsibilities without any geographical barrier.
Although it is widely known that technology has many benefits, it is important to mention the opposite view, because in some cases, the excessive use can make people more introvert. In other words, people that become technophile tend to substitute personal contact with virtual one. To illustrate, a study conducted by Cambridge University showed that 46% of people who perform their studies or work from home, without any human contact for days presented signs of depression and lack of social skills. However, extreme cases like these are not as common, which means technology is still helping people to be socially active.
To conclude, technology made social interaction easier and handy, however it is vital to control the time spent on mobile phones and computers in order to maintain the right balance between virtual and face-to-face contact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tion tools to interact with their loved ones anywhere and anytime. For example, Face...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79697941016 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.992464337 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.272727273 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137141753484 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055086291447 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394806686719 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880722496957 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346031862264 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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