Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?
The advancement in technology has brought a number of benefits to the society and one of the advantages is Aviation. However, certain individuals have this notion that the demand of travelling by air will be reduced in future. In my opinion, I do believe that the lowering of demand of air travel will have a negative impact on the economy and society.
The reduction in the need for traveling through aircraft will be beneficial for society as flying through air contribute to global warming and pollution as airplanes run on kerosene fuel which when combusted releases a huge amount of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen monoxide in atmosphere which destroys the thin layer of the stratosphere, causing the harmful sun rays to enter the Earth’s atmosphere. To elucidate, a recent study reports that on an average the airplane releases more than 60 percent of harmful gases in the atmosphere thus they are the one of the main reason for environment degradation.
However, air travel has made the world a smaller place, now travelling through air to different countries saves a lot of time thus making human life much easier. Furthermore, countries that largely depend on tourism as the major source of income have been aided by convenient air travel hence, any reduction in air transport will not only affect tourist inflow adversely but also bring down the economic growth of those nations. To illustrate, Maldives, an island nation solely depends on its tourism industry and any reduction will bring down its foreign cash inflow and economy drastically.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the disadvantage of reduction in air travel outweighs the advantages as the reduced air crafts will have a negative influence on the nations economy and growth and will even make the human life harder as they will have to spend a lot of time in travelling to other places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...s will have a negative influence on the nations economy and growth and will even make t...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nd will even make the human life harder as they will have to spend a lot of time i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02821316614 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73315403759 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.166535845 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.222222222 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4444444444 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266031927101 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117992765358 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909141675554 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172812242023 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782308824658 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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