Some people believe travelling within a city is better with a car while others think a bicycle is a better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A significant number of people opine that moving within the city by car is superior, whereas, some others have a notion that bicycle travelling is more effective. Both the ways of travelling have advantages which will be discussed in the below paragraphs followed by an opinion.
In one way, the bicycle transport is very effective as it provides support in exercise. In other words, the person using daily bicycle can make himself more fit by bicycle rides which will do his work out jobs and save his time from exercise classes such as the gym. Moreover, within the city range, the bicycle ride can favour the environment also. For illustration, travelling by cycles everyone can minimize the pollution levels in society and makes the environment healthier.
In another way, travelling by car is quite effective and much needed in the community which saves a lot of time in this modern and busy world. The motor ride is easy and fast to reach destinations with more comfort zone. For instance, reaching from point one to another during an emergency like a medical visit by a patient should be carried through car travelling. Finally, in my opinion, most of the city centre points are close to each other, therefore a person should try to visit by using a bicycle unless there are any crises like situation.
In conclusion, commuting within the city by car is more quick and convenient although travelling through bicycle is more effective as it makes the environment and person both healthy. Hence, using a cycle as a carrier is more useful and beneficial to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...bicycle ride can favour the environment also. For illustration, travelling by cycles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64108420664 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.092514541 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223018294972 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820473923933 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677347707424 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148686267188 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696489595115 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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