Some people believe that wild animals that live in urban areas should be killed; others argue that they should be protected. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In some urban areas it is common to see forest animals and birds today, as they have begun to migrate to cities due to rapidly lessening forest areas. While some people believe that we should hunt them down, others are eager to protect them. I strongly agree with the latter view as animals have equal rights to live on this earth.
The main reason why several people want to kill them is that they are afraid of their own safety. stranded animals in the cities may not have enough food and might attack pedestrians. For instance, in 2015 a lion in Delhi killed a young man and injured several others. Furthermore, these animals might cause damage to the property. The gardens, parked vehicles, and statues would be easy targets. In addition, they make the city dirty by littering everywhere.
However, hunting them down is not the only option to solve the above-mentioned problems. There are other alternative ways as well. Firstly, the government should depute a specially trained team to capture these animals and birds and send them to national parks or their habitat. For example, in 2013, the Indian government formed a special team to capture stranded monkeys in Kolkata and released them in a dense forest. Secondly, people should build strong compound walls to protect their property from these wild animals. Proper fencing would limit animal movements. Finally, if the governments take necessary actions to rebuild their natural habitat, they will not come to city areas.
In conclusion, it is evident that wild animals cause a lot of problems in the cities. However, killing them is not the only possible solution. if the above-stated measures are taken then we would not have any problem from these creatures. Moreover, it is their fundamental right as well to live on the earth.
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Suggestion: Stranded
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Suggestion: If
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96357615894 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46783838731 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7025650394 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.95 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211675155773 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543068506775 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452650662056 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124633813274 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643855774227 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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