Some people believe that young people bring more profits to a company. Others say that older people actually bring more profits. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
Today’s youngsters are more advanced and creative. They have more knowledge about technology which helps them to create creative ideas. Some people argue that youth employees are more beneficial to earn more money for their employer, while others thinking that experienced people are efficient in that. In my opinion, today’s generation plays a key role for their company to gain more profits.
There are plenty of reasons which support my opinion. To begin with, in today’s world you can find a solution to every problem with a single click from the internet. Youngsters are very fond of the internet. So, they can find solutions to every problem of their company within a second. Youngsters have fresh blood, critical thinking, and bright ideas. These kinds of employees take their company to a higher level from a lower level. For Example, if a software company launches any new software or product in the market to use then young employees finish the training quickly and learn how to use that product in a day. They are reliable and stronger. So, they can work long hours. Youths are smart and passionate about their goals.
On the other side, aged people also play a vital role in their organization. To initiate, they have a lot of experience and doing work in the same company for a long time. Because of that, they know how to maintain relationships with regular clients and deal with new clients. Additionally, they already faced the same problem multiple times during their work experience so without taking the time they can find the solution to that problem. They always thinking about how much cost the company has to pay for any kind of thing before buying them. In this way, the company can save money for future development.
To conclude, both generations have their own advantages. The young generation is faster, stronger, independent, and knowledgeable which helps their company to grow quickly. While older generations is experienced and cost-effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63749645818 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3384756035 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0869565217 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142918762965 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412611881969 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581700539783 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101829373305 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860208860839 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.