Some people argue that deriving benefits from living creatures in the light of medical experiments for human beings should be free in today's developing society. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view for a range of reasons. It is no doubt true that people should do medical experiments to maintain scientific researches. First and foremost it could be argued that whether the usage of animals in these experiments is a must. While some people assert that we must do tests on animals, others are of the opinion that there are good arguments against this. One of the main argument of those in favor of animal usage is that many renowned lifesaving medications were invented in this way and animal experiments may help us to come up with more remedies in the future. Indeed possibly even a remedy for malignant diseases such as cancer and AIDS. On the other hand, one of the main arguments of those against animal experiments is that these experiments are inhuman and cause animals a lot of pain. Moreover, they assert that many tests are not crucial indeed and in fact animals are not only used to test medicines but also new cosmetics which could be tested in another way. Another issue is that sometimes an experiment on animals can mislead us because animals' body is not exactly the same as or own. As a result, this testing may not be providing proper safety that its proponents claim.
In light of the facts discussed above, I am of the opinion that the merits do not outweigh the disadvantages and testing on animals should not maintain. Although it may have some benefits for humans it is not fair that animals should suffer so as to achieve this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...at people should do medical experiments so as to maintain scientific researches. First a...
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Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...animals in these experiments is a must. While some people assert that we must do test...
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Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...me up with more remedies in the future. Indeed possibly even a remedy for malignant di...
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Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... is not fair that animals should suffer so as to achieve this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7074829932 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52582569779 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4396860999 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247889128562 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905939167257 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055578294681 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200065920885 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192785497094 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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