Majority of customers often consider cost as a primary determinant while purchasing an item or a facility. I partially agree with this view because many products have a variation in price depending on the social and economic situations.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that products manufactured by many reputed companies often comes with a high price. This is because of the quality and the customer service they offer to their buyers. What is more, these companies try their best to be latest in the research and development aspects thus providing their users with more than what is asked for. For instance, Apple, a major manufacturer of smartphones and laptops is an expensive brand; yet, people are fascinated towards their gadgets.
However, the factors such as demand versus supply, festival seasons and competition frequently come in to picture thus altering the price of the same product by big margins. Thanksgiving holidays are the best example for this scenario. Similarly, the money spent on certain services such as medical treatments or everyday utilities vary depending on economic conditions of a nation. For example, the expenses for attending a doctor in the USA are too high when compared to those in India. Likewise, a smart TV costs too much in India when compared to certain countries due to the underlying levies charged for imports and exports.
To conclude, owing to the socio-economic factors, I think that price is not a fixed variable and hence it is not always a determining factor when investing in a product or a utility.
- some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them.Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem? 89
- It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life.What is your opinion? 78
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:•describe the work you have been 78
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, likewise, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83243975771 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3377828832 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163383488849 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536771219824 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354294510063 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923032489464 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029182664424 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.