Dear Mr. Smith,
I am one of your participants in the evening course held at your university. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the course.
The course is DBMS, which is about design, development, and optimization of various databases. The classes involve both theoretical and practical aspects, and lasts for 60 days. The first half involves lectures and the rest deals with lab work where we get a chance to implement mock projects about various data models.
This course gives me a privilege to pursue knowledge about the upcoming versions and techniques to upgrade and migrate the existing databases in our company. However, the computers in the labs are currently configured with low memory and disk space, which in turn is resulting in slow data processing. Working in high speed environments, this is causing me a trouble to learn many things.
I would like the university to upgrade the desktops with latest processors so that students like me get a realtime feel while doing mock projects. Moreover, there are limited computers in the lab which is causing longer wait times during after hours.
Therefore, if possible, kindly bring in additional devices.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your's sincerely,
Jonathon trott
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... the university to upgrade the desktops with latest processors so that students like me get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22330097087 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79946872948 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674757281553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.774661138 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208799049151 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646090513304 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583789033023 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881395739726 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077028582081 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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