Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization.
Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Entrepreneurship skills require a lot of expertise. However, there is a set of people who decide start their own enterprise rather than taking up a job in any association or a firm due to various reasons. I am of the opinion that the merits of such a brave decision far outweighs the demerits. This essay would certainly prove as to why starting up one’s own venture would be far more advantageous?
Firstly, in today’s time, the rising rate of unemployment is a cause of concern to most of the economies. So, if a person has got the talent as well as expertise to take up any business. One should never hesitate in taking up it as a challenge. For instance, the government of India is also encouraging business loans, by sanctioning business loans to even start ups or small scale industries at a nominal rate of interest, to facilitate the youth of the country to be self-employed. This trend has given a rise to a myriad number of start-ups be it rural India or urban India. This kind of pragmatic measure would not only down the cut rate of unemployment, but will surely benefit the entire nation, as one employer can employ thousands of employees.
Secondly, even though a job seems to come with a few benefits like job security, fixed income etc. Nonetheless, it limits your chances for promotion or even growth. Although, eventually you start feeling underpaid or less appreciated, in that case a courageous move on your behalf to take calculated risk and starting out your own venture would certainly feel rewarding. After working for a couple of years many employees have taken the initiative to set up their own firms. Take for example, Arnab Goswami, a famous Journalist and News anchor on television of late he has launched Republic TV an Indian television news channel of his own. Furthermore, He is doing fabulously well for himself, So, now he doesn’t have to share his profits or even his losses with any one. Therefore, he is reaping the benefits of his own growth.
To summarize my exposition, I would like reinstate my faith in self-employment as comes with a set of benefits like maximum growth and optimum learning, as it makes you an all-rounder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 769, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...are his profits or even his losses with any one. Therefore, he is reaping the benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82228116711 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96558367226 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59151193634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5280300403 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222975101281 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587272625077 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666120241028 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107117454654 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766319789434 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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