Now-a-days, every profession has now become money minded. It is often said that film stars, musicians and players are being overpaid in there profession. This essay will discuss why I think these professionals are highly paid and will describe more profession which should be given higher salary.
Amount of money they earn doesn't reflect the hard work and effort they do for there profession. For instance, Amitabh Bachan can earn 1 million easily by working in any movie. Additionally, Shahrukh Khan also earns 1 million a year. This amount can never be reached by 90% of the world population no matter how much hard working they do in there profession. Hence, these profession's are highly paid than the other work.
However, there are also other jobs which should be highly paid than the sports person and actors. Trustes of the society make gud contribution to the work and there motive is not to earn money but do gud for society. These people should be rewarded to develop there interest in the work. For example, doctors save life and motivate them to live longer. They should rewarded by giving more salary. Additionally, teacher's job is deserving. they are true teacher as they teach students and people how to respect and learn things. Hence, these jobs should be overpaid.
In my opinion, entertainer job is only to entertain people but not to do something gud for life of the people. It is necessary for the government to take action and pay attention to other professions as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...bs which should be highly paid than the sports person and actors. Trustes of the socie...
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...more salary. Additionally, teachers job is deserving. they are true teacher as they teach st...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...dditionally, teachers job is deserving. they are true teacher as they teach students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92549019608 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52441823554 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6240330363 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7777777778 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22934411259 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750581791791 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688693602456 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139226064852 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427793235747 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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