Over recent years, there has been much debate on the issue of marriage. Some believe that valid age at which people can marry should be minimum 21. Although it may have several negative aspects, I support it.
To begin with, it can bring horrible effects on society. Because most times the results of early marriages are not so pleasant. Making decision in low ages most of time are not logical.
Apart from this, it is true that when poele married soon parents ages is not so far from their children so it cause that they will be friend with each other and they can talk easier. For instance about one century ago in most western country girls married in 15-19 and boys in 19-21, that shows good relationship between them.
Nevertheless,although marriage before 21 has some suitable conclution, but I disagree it. Marriage have some rules that I think people should notice them. One of them is maturity. With incresing age, people achieve some great experiences that they did mot have before. These can help them to defy much chalenges which they are face in their life.
First and most importantly, marriage in suitable age lead to make standard life for young. Because first of all they can gain enough knowledge for their job, after that they can choose and have a fantastic job and finally they can have the best choise for their spouse.
In conclution, marriage for various society and diffrent culture is varied. I think when people feel that they have enough experience and also have enough money for support a family, they can marry and of course most of most people gain these till 21.
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...lationship between them. Nevertheless,although marriage before 21 has some suitable co...
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...conclution, but I disagree it. Marriage have some rules that I think people should n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think', 'of course', 'first of all', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.187702265372 0.247107183377 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.152103559871 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126213592233 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453074433657 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0873786407767 0.0437548338989 200% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.148867313916 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0194174757282 0.0403226058552 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.35725695922 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00970873786408 0.0326793684256 30% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0453074433657 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0388349514563 0.021408717616 181% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0129449838188 0.011925033212 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1601.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73835125448 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290322580645 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21146953405 0.28420135186 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118279569892 0.203846283523 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0537634408602 0.137316102897 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.35725695922 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 60.4476295816 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4117647059 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8194138452 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.814263465372 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 37.5587181109 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225549403381 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0813825719668 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660993436871 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520302945925 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153947146801 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857953218445 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114961730833 0.0742795772207 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200664758761 0.324371583561 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101202806168 0.0638462369009 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132874377097 0.228012699653 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836220230666 0.058150111329 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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