Paparazzi are independent photographers who take photos of high profile people.
While it's their job to take photos of these high profile people especially movie actors some believe that it is worng as it invades their privacy and other believe that it's a small price to pay for the fame, although both statements might be true I believe that these celebrities have their own life and invading their privacy is graceless,I will give my reasons as to why I think this.
Paparazzi plays a big role in the life of celebrities as well as their fans, as a fan would always like to know about the hot gossips and perosnal whereabouts of their favourite celebrity, and a celebrity will be able to gain a boost in their fan base when a paparazzi shoots them at an appropriate moment.
For example : When a famous actor was spotted helping poor people by distributing food and clothes to them.
As being caught on a appropriate moment can have a boost for their image, but being spotted on a wrong moment can cause a detrimental effect on their personal branding.
Many times these famous personalities get spotted by paparazzi at very inappropriate moments like when they are out with their loved one's or attending someone's funeral.
Posting photos of such moments of their life where they cannot have a personal life is absolutley wrong.
For example: When a cricketer did not want to reveal who he is dating but was spotted by a paprazzi couple of time in a romantic setting with his partner, which completely invaded their personal space.
Inconclusion while paparazzi is just doing their jobs, In my opinion they should not inavde their personal life by following them everywhere and taking pictures of them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87372013652 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64977993493 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1594392507 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296127005685 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114304901029 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109602395843 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114304901029 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109602395843 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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