Healthcare is a basic facility that every citizen of a country should have access to. Free health care is something that all the countries should provide free of cost to their citizens, although some might not agree with this but I believe that healthcare for all is very important for a country to develop, I will explain my view below with examples.
In the times that we live, with the advancement of technology, medicines and healthcare technology is becoming cheaper as compared to it was 10 years ago, even though the cost of healthcare has become cheaper but there are many people who are not able to afford it due to unemployment and other financial reasons and this has a very detrimental effect not just on them but also on the progress of the nation as an unhealthy population is harmful for the development of the country. Having access to free healthcare will make sure that every person in the country is healthy and thus can contribute more towards the well being and progress. I agree that the latest technology will not be accessible very quickly as they are expensive but providing basic healthcare is more important.
People who live in parts of the world where they have access to free healthacre are happier.
For example : Canada has a free healthcare policy for it's citizen and that has made it one of the best countries to live in terms of peace and health, and as a reason it attracts a lot of immigrants from all around the world who contribute towards the growth and development of the nation.
In conclusion, in my view, no cost healthcare not only promotes health living for the population of a country it ensures well being and develpment of the nation as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70707070707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63195088157 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.774946549 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.75 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.125 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197710101036 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101494833895 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291455619813 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113780982873 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368698915902 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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