Dear Sir,
My name is Manish and I am wriritng this letter to bring your attention towards the issues that I am facing because of inconsistency of the bus service, let me explain you ib detail.
I live near the Kingston bus station and I have always relied on the bus service for my travelling to and from my college, but from past two weeks there has been alot of probelms as the buses are getting cancelled or they arrive very late and due to this I am not able to reach my college on time affecting my studies.
It would be really helpful if the services could be improved as it was earlier or perhaps a notice stating the change in timings or intimation about the cancellation of buses beforehand could be really helpful as I will be able to plan my travelling time accordingly.
I hope you can understand my trouble and will be able to help me.
Yours sincerely
Manish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41717791411 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5430169386 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.511937698 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.0 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104538154072 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624791141196 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046698054577 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538235061354 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048504488434 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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