There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
a. Describe what the problems are
b. Explain how these problems are affecting you
c. Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about your bus service in our area. The service has been extremely unreliable over the past couple of weeks. As a consequence, we have been facing plenty of issues.
Firstly, the arrival and departure times of the buses have become unpredictable due to which we are unable to reach office on time. To resolve this, we suggest you to instruct the bus drivers to be disciplined enough to understand the value of customers' time.
Secondly, the vehicles are not clean. There is plenty of litter under the seats which do not allow u...
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