Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for these behaviors? What actions can be taken to present people from moving to this problem?
Nowadays, people generally buy several goods which are not essential to them and sometimes it put them into debt. This essay intends to discuss various reasons for this happening and provide some solutions to reduce it.
Let us now discuss why people get into debt. The primary cause for this is that peeps want to their status up in the society and it insists them to buy the expensive things which could not be afforded by them easily. Moreover, a number of discount offers at big shopping complexes attract people to get the unnecessary items and people are allured by these kinds of benefits. To illustrate, when people go to shopping malls to buy the necessary goods then they take the numerous other items which are not required for the time being but less price than the market motivate them to buy those products.
With the help of some methods, this unwanted shopping can be reduced. Firstly, shopping complexes should regulate a limit on the credit cards of customers so that they can think first before buying something. In addition to this, assistance staff can help consumers to provide the benefits and drawbacks of buying some product so that customer can buy accordingly. Apart from this, Special counseling sessions can be conducted at several places in which counselors can council to the people who are in the debt to get them out from it. Further, they can also get tips to live a life without worries.
In conclusion, No doubt, to show off their position in the community people buy things by going out from their pocket, however, special counseling is the best way to keep them out of this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40720644257 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7207001302 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351484333761 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134078126287 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375222385517 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199343876261 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713328093675 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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