Some people say that parents should control their children behavior from a very young age. what do you think?
Although, parents play a cardinal role in the life of children’s they have also an onus of instilling the best values in their children. I think it is essential for them to always give direction to their children’s whenever they choose the wrong path.
To start with, restrictions and motivations teach children about the responsibilities and respect which in turn, make them more understandable person. It helps them to know the value of respect towards others and leads to make them goal oriented. In other words, if parents ignore and do not realize their role then children adopt other sources to learn such as TV, the Internet, and the people around them etcetera. They learn whatever they see and observe. Sometimes it ends in vulgarity and violence. Later on, it becomes juggernaut tasks for parents to get their children to get out from this kind of mud.
Apart from the above, the next concern is with regard to the bad company. When parents do not look after their wards then this isolation insist children’s indulge in the bad activities like drugs, crime, thieving and many more. Further, it leads to make them drug addicts and it is an uphill task for their parents to convert them into the normal lifestyle.
Owing to these all consequences, it is paramount for the parents to inculcate the good ethical values, good behavior and positive traits in their children’s from the early ages. Moreover, they should strict against the bad mischievousness of children's.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that parents are responsible for bringing their child into the world, therefore, it is their duty to infuse good influences in them otherwise things may go out of hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em otherwise things may go out of hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, apart from, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03873239437 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84376931272 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4509535299 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234846065028 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752879598193 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535852182702 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134168261137 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170573471228 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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