Some people point out that there will be less international travel in future. Do you think it is negative or positive trend?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Travelling means visiting new places, exploring their culture and tradition. But, some individuals believe that in coming time, overseas travel will be reduced. In my opinion, I think that International tourism has many benefits so their reduction will have bad impact.
Tourism is a good source of income to the nation as when foreigners visit historical or ancient places, amusement parks or any other tourist places, they are highly charged for entrance tickets. So, this money is used by government to maintain such famouch places for example, proper cleanliness of tourist places as well as the area that surrounds the visiting place, drinking water facility, toilets etcetera in order to attract more people. On the other hand, if count of tourist get reduced then the government of the country will loose source of income and will not be able to collect money to maintain well known locations.
Beside that, tourism has also provided jobs of tourist guide to many individuals who are earning good amount of money to run their families. Some of them are working as full-time guides while other are part-time guides. But if travel to international places will become limited then many people will become jobless.
Moreover, with decrease in tourism, individuals will not be able to gather information or knowledge about culture, traditions, food habits, historical importance, weather, living standard of other places and they will not be able to find friends of different culture and nation.
In conclusion, I would like to say that decrease of international tourism will have worst effect on the economical condition of the country as well as maintaining the famous places. Government should take steps to enhance tourism by providing better facilities and affordable travelling tickets otherwise government have to suffer from great loss.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...then the government of the country will loose source of income and will not be able t...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the worst'.
Suggestion: have the worst
... decrease of international tourism will have worst effect on the economical condition of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3231292517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69780214705 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7385232214 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135270453395 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552181506581 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038855949251 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803273539045 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265391312784 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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