It is true that people consider the climate condition for their interest and stay. Some people enjoy staying in the area where it is cold and the activities that only present in this sort of condition. While others love that the hot weather is their first concern to active their habits and lifestyle, I believe that living in a place where is in cold weather condition is essential.
On the on hand, it knows that the tropical continent is the main tourism destination around the world. As the result show that the high percentage of tourists are coming from high latitudes country. They tend to enjoy to living in a warmer climate where they hardly to experience in their home town. Moreover, some sort of sports is obviously present in hot weather country, such as surfing, swimming and sun bathing. Therefore, people who prefer hot climate country because of their living background.
In the opposite side, people prefer to live in the hot weather country is expected to experience the different sort of landscape and activities. For example, it is impossible to see a snow when you live in a tropical country. They enjoy their lifestyle in coldest climate because the scenery of snow is amazing for them as well as the activity in this weather condition. In addition to this weather condition is also comfortable for physical feeling as this circumstance it is difficult to be sweating compare to the hot climate place.
In conclusion, whether people consider the activities and lifestyle that they prefer, while some people enjoy to live in hot climate country for tourist purpose. I personally interest the cold weather is essential place to stay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n tourism destination around the world. As the result show that the high percentag...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the coldest'.
Suggestion: in the coldest
...cal country. They enjoy their lifestyle in coldest climate because the scenery of snow is ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy living'.
Suggestion: enjoy living
...yle that they prefer, while some people enjoy to live in hot climate country for tourist purp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60850258085 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8281495345 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294330509705 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10623119014 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101568510823 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217734813892 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863729657609 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.