It is interesting to comment on the topic that some people like cold weather and others dont. Cold weather has its own pros and cons.
I hereby entails some of the benefits of winter season. Cold weather brings lot of comfort for the people who hate sweating. Also many housewives get relaxation with the fact because the food they cook does not get stale easily. Even many people they like going for winter trips as they can enjoy bonefire and snow on hill stations. The economy of the tourist based countries like dubai inflates during winter season. There are many regional food items that are only made during winters.
However, on the contrary, there is also a category of individuals who prefers summer season more. They feel that they cannot roam around freely during winter season. They sit at home and use heaters for most of the day. Winters also become troublesome for students. Many students feel that it is difficult to sit on table and study due to cold weather. Due to low temperature they have to sit in blankets on bed. Many sleep while studying. This also affect their academic performance.
Thus, in the conclusion, i would like to hammer the nail and pen down saying that season is totally subjective based on the choice and comfort of the individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ome people like cold weather and others dont. Cold weather has its own pros and cons...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... own pros and cons. I hereby entails some of the benefits of winter season. Cold weather...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...mfort for the people who hate sweating. Also many housewives get relaxation with the...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sleep seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much sleep', 'a good deal of sleep'.
Suggestion: Much sleep; A good deal of sleep
...re they have to sit in blankets on bed. Many sleep while studying. This also affect their ...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erformance. Thus, in the conclusion, i would like to hammer the nail and pen d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77027027027 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29484500804 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4267424085 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2941176471 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0588235294 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130786297051 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487962089518 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708263258271 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102169860495 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110264781425 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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