Indeed, the modern tendencies show the clear picture, that some part of people prefer to play a team type of sports, whereas, other part of society think that the valuable to choose an individual sort of sports. Obvoiusly, distinguish section of physical activities have own advantages and disadvantages and in this essay I will try to show extended view to this statement.
On the one hand, people try to select team format activities due to several benefits. Doubtless, to work in team is considered as a hard work because of not everyone could cooperate with other teammates. For instance, the footbal regarded as a team sport and people who select this kind of sport have a notion that succeed of the game depends on cooperation and supporting each other in team and heeby players teach themself that they must rely on entire team in order to win the game. Secondly, coachers teach their team to value every teammates and encourage by ensuring that the each player is a part of family.
Nevertheless, the team sport is flawed owing to several reasons.Firstly, every team has own leader and it is inevitably, obviously, not everyone could accept it and hence share awards among the team. Secondly, one of the players could move responsoblities for the game to other mate.
To turn the individual type of sports, I can say, that here the person could evolve a personal skill and focus all efforts on special part of physical activity. Futhrmore, individual sport teaches the person be totally independent from other people.
However, the minus of this kind of activity is missing and sustain a social skills due to you are only one person in individual sport.
In conclusion, as for me people must select any kind of sport according to their own personality and preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74567811306 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2550337428 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219773061453 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731208283863 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781942735656 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097458170197 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757044048956 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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