Food is everyone's need to survive and to maintain a healthy life. Purchasing quality products are always a priority to anyone. People might buy things from the supermarkets all these years but some may prefer to window shopping for better variety. I think both ways are best but I will talk about this ahead.
Supermarts are today's generation most popular place for all the stuff they need in a daily life. Many different eatables like snacks, vegetables, milk, and other dairy products all are found under one roof. Moreover, you can get special discount offers on all these items which makes it friendly for our pockets. The major reason is you are able to check all the parameters of the products by your own eyes. even if something is bad or outdated you can return these in a given time. From the early days till now many of the consumers prefer shopping themselves as they think buying things personally is assuring to them.
As, the malls are great for shopping but nowadays online stores are way more convenient and competitive in terms of quality and diversity for food items. Customers are able to choose anything that they want with just a single click on their mobile devices. There are many applications for shopping like Big Basket, Reliance Fresh, Spencer, D-Mart just to name a few. All these have revolutionised shopping and the customers are available with not only local but even international brands to choose from. In fact, consumers are assured of the brand's quality, quantity and specifications which they will not be able to analyze normally. Furthermore, all these companies provide the option of home delivery and even cash on delivery so you won't have to worry about anything except a great choice of food items.
To sum up, shopping is better in both ways either done physically or visually. The difference is more options are available online and not offline. The quality should be our prime preference than anything else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...ll the stuff they need in a daily life. Many different eatables like snacks, vegetables, milk,...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...eters of the products by your own eyes. even if something is bad or outdated you can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88855421687 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53376637773 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.611453896 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4210526316 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234286386675 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609868472184 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634727009225 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145393748109 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559800278388 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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