Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals tend to live their life following the same routine neglecting any change. While it is thought that including few dynamics to the usual cycle is most beneficial for them, others disagree. I support the former view, as having few alterations in life brings excitement and joy in life.
To begin with the positives of accepting changes, the prime benefit is that it gives a platform to people to test their skills to something new. While it would fill their life with several creative activities, it also plays a vital role in exploring the new talent within themselves. For instance, if someone tries a new art such as dancing, singing or painting every now and then just for a change from a hectic lifestyle, they may end-up finding a lucrative skill, which would be extremely interesting to them, and accordingly, they could further pursue that skill to get professional training. Further, it is often seen that the change in career brings financial benefits and promotion. For instance, if a person jumps from one job to another frequently, it would add a reasonable hike to his salary, as every new organisation would at least offer 30% increment on the last drawn salary as a standard process.
On the other hand, unlike change, the numbness in career and other aspects of life has its own advantages. firstly, it gives a sense of fulfillment and professional stability to an individual. Although it would be monotonous to lead the same routine every day, whether it is in the office or at home, the financial security and organised lifestyle can be achieved with this way of living. For instance, in Government jobs, people often spend their entire life doing the same repetitive job without any expectation of getting any promotion or change, still they have a stable job and regular income coming in, which is often the ultimate goal for many people.
In conclusion, despite of having the monetary security and ideal life that can be accomplished without making any changes to lifestyle, the change is the key to success, which gives a motive and fill our life with several new adventures, in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...rt such as dancing, singing or painting every now and then just for a change from a hectic lifesty...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...aspects of life has its own advantages. firstly, it gives a sense of fulfillment and pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, then, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92520775623 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70750648861 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3316925691 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137631527524 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507473762146 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324646510101 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879118701211 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018802044885 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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