Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy those things which are not really needed. Other people say that advertisement tells us more about new products that may change our lives. Which view point do you agree with?
Selling item through advertising has become common and growing trend due to its unquestioned prevalence. However, some say that the advertisement compells people to do extravagant purchasing while I firmly agree with those who consider advertising as a tremendous way of improving people's lives.
On the one hand, the opponents of advertised products irrationally state whatever is bought via advertising is just for the social dominance. The product ascertained by this way sometime seems expensive and being used by rich people of this item make them to be respected everywhere. Therefore, people often purchase needless things just merely to show off. . The purpose of shoes and glasses is, for example, to protect foot and eyes while fewer people have more than 4-5 pairs of same items. Among these pairs, one is local- made used for casual concerns whereas other branded products of such as the Nike and the Armani are used in parties just to impress people by wealth. However, i believe that this is not as common trend as it is esteemed by minority.
On the other hand, i side with those who believe that Advertisement invariably has numerous purposes .The manufacturer frequently sales those items which costumers disparately demand after watching the advertisement of products. Furthermore ,they also show through advertisement how their new item is different from old one in terms of features, characteristics ,usefulness, price and how should it be used in a safe way if dangerous to use when neglected guidelines . To illustrate this, a recent commercial on Star TV clearly describes in what ways the cleaning product such as bleach (soduim hypocrite) for toilet -bowl is safely used. Not being able to read it's guidelines, a lot of uneducated people ,which is why, get infected by these toxic agents. In-fact, not only does advertisement provide information about usage of products, but also prevents people from getting problem . thus, getting things via advertising is a pragmatic way of making individual's lifestyle further better .
In conclusion, although some are persuaded by adervertising to have more items than their need, i strongly think that there are more positive benefits as well for people if advertised things are bought and used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23966942149 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91138771989 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600550964187 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0757648191 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285474971729 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909901812049 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711972581444 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185225710533 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446596292245 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.