Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
There is an interesting discussion regarding advertisements directed at the consumers. The correct consumption of products has been a topic of heated debate during the last two decades for the experts. Some people argue that it is essential as its benefits society by improving people’s lives, while others argue that it is unnecessary, and mainly in increases community expenses. In my view, products advertisements are a crucial part of the economy.
Firstly, the main goal of advertisement is to inform interested consumers about new products developed by different companies and launched into the market. For instance, advertising will allow buyers to know the features of the interested products in shops or online. This means that the consumer will have an opportunity to review the product, even to compare it with other brands. The idea behind this is to have a possibility to choose the products, evaluate price differences, and finally buy it.
Secondly, it is essential to recognise that this society moves according to the economy. This is because some consumers buy products that will never be used. For the companies, it is essential that more customers buy their products because this will mean they earn money, which is what moves the global economy around the world. Therefore, companies need more consumers to generate more production, in addition the possibility to create more jobs.
In conclusion, advertising is essential in our life. The consumer can choose the product according to different features. It is clear that without consumers, there would be no economic cycle in the countries. For this reason, I think that advertisement plays a role essential in this society, and the development of the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28158844765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96082147184 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0199597446 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169121621959 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587046473538 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391263699669 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106227055099 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310486731214 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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