Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays advertisements have increased immensely due to increase in products. In some scenarios, people think that advertising nudges them to purchase things that they do not require while others feel that it is important for a better lifesyle. This essay will discuss which viewpoint is superior.
Firstly, advert market is huge and filled with many creative people. Though many companies opt for this platform to sell their goods, the question we must ask is do we really need them? With the growing market trends, more and more people blindly choose to buy things that are not necessary. Many reccent studies indicate that adverts create demand in public economy. These products only create confusion amongst public. In many cases, quality of the material advertised is hampered therefore decreasing the life span of the item. This not only forces people to buy more products but also gives rise to wastage of money.
Secondly, advertisement is a key part of modern business as it informs us about the growing trends. It surely gives us multiple choices and services in order to make us satisfised but it really isn't needed. Dating back to earlier times sources were limited but people were happier. People back then also led a good lifestyle. Advertisements have created a superficial society. The need for a good and improved life have made us fake. To my knowledge, kids these days are becoming more and more stubborn as they force their elders to get them products displayed on the advertising irrespective of the cost which makes the latter difficult to fulfill kids' demands due to budget constraints.
In my opinion, even though adverts may improve our lives the need for things is not required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...der to make us satisfised but it really isnt needed. Dating back to earlier times so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05653710247 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58969380491 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8992413282 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310160644383 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081903358773 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544432694086 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178480048717 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162611093403 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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