Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Producing food locally plays a vital role in a country's economy; however, some people believe that importing food is superior to growing in the homeland. According to my opinion, food cultivating in own country not only helps in Economical growth but also provide employment to people, low-cost food, and better food distribution.
Considering Financial growth, a country should cultivate own food to have cost-effectiveness. In other words, producing food in own land is always cost less than importing from another country. Moreover, it also provides employment to local people, by which unemployment can be further reduced. Fortunately, Farming tea & rice, for example, provide a financial backbone to India; a lot of people has benefited out of it. Now India, besides consuming rice as a major portion of food, it also exports it to have earnings.
Another major aspect is the cost of food and further distribution to common individuals. Possessing in house foods always have an indispensable advantage when circulation to people is considered and the consumer will get food at cheaper price as well. On the other hand, imported food have a higher margin and supply to huge mass also practically not possible. Hence despite the quality, if demand increases the food price will also increase - "Law of Supply and Demand". Rice and Onions, for instance, is cheaper and easily available all over India compare to cereals and dragon fruits.
In conclusion, people might feel fancy about imported food as it is not readily available, in my opinion, cultivating in own farm will be benefited to the entire nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: Economic
...vating in own country not only helps in Economical growth but also provide employment to p...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uge mass also practically not possible. Hence despite the quality, if demand increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27692307692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96710251542 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7414897579 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262434087231 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100720446387 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770781838004 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176997722394 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071620608155 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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