To begin with, poverty has been considered as world's most crucial hazard as it causes too much further problems. Folks believe that economic growth should be encouraged to overcome this issue to some extent. In my opinion, such practice could be dangerous for the environment. I shall give reasons for my views in following paragraphs. To add on, I will discuss both of the statements of people.
Assuredly, economic growth can be achieved by industrialization. these industries can benefit many who are well educated, qualified yet unemployed due to lack of suitable scopes. they can earn good from these organizations and become capable to compliance families. Furthermore, such circumstances can inspire them not to migrate to other countries to seek better jobs.
However, rise of automation may lead to enormous atmosphere damage. Because they require variety of natural resources to start such that land, water, etcetera. In addition, man made assets are also utilized like electricity. In this way, the rapid and excessive consumption of these belongings will badly affect future generations.
Hence, public should be motivated to adopt other possible alternatives for earning. To exemplify, agriculture should be the preference in the areas where there is adequate water supply and weather conditions are available; fish farming is suitable for the locations near sea; dairy farms can be opened at any place with relevant resources; and many more to go.
All in all, instead of instigating climate destruction, other applicable choices should be made for living. such efforts can resolve both poverty issue and environment safety problem.
- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? 84
- Scientist have been warning for many years that to protect our environment, we have to limit use of energy in our daily lives, despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons and how people can encourage to save environment? 89
- Some people think that public libraries are not necessary today. Buy some feel that they r still providing some useful services. Discuss both the issues from your opinion. 73
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letterintroduce yourselfdescribe your plans for the partyinvite your neighbour to comeYou 73
- You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say– What is the reason?– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?– S 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: These
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Suggestion: They
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Suggestion: Such
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45525291829 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94125849411 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704280155642 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7719075077 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17414273744 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528009778187 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550348280879 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882931902175 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667006800245 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.