Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. Others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The government’s investment in infrastructure are always been questionable. Some people tell that the government should not invest more money in building theatres and sports stadiums, while others believe that investment in medical care and education is worth more. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why spending more money on medical care and education is worthwhile.
Firstly, the government investing money in building theatres and sports stadium is a waste of money. In order to entertain people government fund a lot of money, this unnecessary funding might lead a country to lose also will tend to forget the most important living criteria that are most necessary for humans. A classic example would be the novel coronavirus that hit humans, due to which world came up with an idea of lockdown, where people were restricted to go into public and closed all the amenities; which clearly shows that during this kind of pandemic situation entertainment sector was not functioning and the country got into a huge loss. In short, spending a lot of money on entertainment will ultimately end up in a huge loss.
Secondly, if the lawmakers spend more money on developing health care and education, it is worth it. As there is an increase in population, providing medical care for each human and also educating them has to be the primary focus; there is an old saying “Health is Wealth” likewise if the peoples are having good health then there will be a good outcome for a country as well by providing education. Although there is required a lot of money to invest in this field, this can be negotiated if the government stops funding building theatres and stadiums. Hence providing funds for health care and education is always beneficial for everyone as well as for the nation.
To conclude contribution towards health care and education is worth more than spending more money on theatre and sports stadiums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...funding building theatres and stadiums. Hence providing funds for health care and edu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as for, as to, in short, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00303951368 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77244971057 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3880778198 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353018123947 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153744175578 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123247450618 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247133511536 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110765409231 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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