Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Submitted by nameisken on Tue, 05/14/2019 - 10:23

There is a controversial statement about what school subject is vital than others. Is it History or Science and Technology? In my opinion, It is hard to say which is important because they all needed by a human being. In this essay, I will discuss both these views.

In term of History, it is an important lesson since it instructs people to do a job properly. To be more precise, there are lots of historical experience which the public can use as a reference. That means we do not have to do everything from the beginning but based on the achievement of forerunners instead. Moreover, History seems a mirror which reflects us some similar things happened in the past but may predict currently. In other words, If we do not care about History, we will get the wrong result easily for lots of things that caused by non-experience from History.

Subjects like Science and Technology are also important. One reason is that human need that kids of skill to survive. To illustrate, mankind can live in the eath well also get higher success than other lives because we can make tools and machines and that talent come form Science and Technology. Another reason is these subject accelerate the progress of human civilization. For instance, civilization got several dramatic growths by the industrial revolution in the past which mainly in the subject of Science and Technology. Nowadays, computer science and artificial intelligence technology are the proudest subjects in our civilization and it will continue as important subjects in the future.

In conclusion, subjects like History, Science and Technology are all important since they all have different uses for us. On the contrary, we will lose benefits in one of the subjects if we neglect one of them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95945945946 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83323307232 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2484498616 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278512020113 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906744275545 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576706623739 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171966307277 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050159776009 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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