Some people believe that the most important subject is History. However, there is also an argument that Science and Technology subjects have more significant impact to the students. I personally think that both subjects are equally important to be taught to the pupils.
History is essential to be taught. Through studying History, students can learn moral values that can improve students' personality. For the example, when facing colonialism, people in the past had characteristics such as hard-working, not easily giving up, and always doing the best for the country. Nowadays, lot of citizens including students are no longer have those traits so they need to be rememebered and taught again. History also involves more memorizing in learning it, that can make pupils increase their right brain ability.
On the other hand, Science and Technology are also very important. In this millennial era, where technology has developed fast, pupils should understand about how to effectively utilize it. Many students have already understood about technology, but they still unable to use it wisely. Internet offers wide varieties of facilities, from lecture videos to online games. If students can't decide wisely, they those facilities may cause negative impacts to their life. Also, learning science is important because it usually involves computing complex mathematical problems, which can increase our left brain ability.
In conclusion, learning History is as important as learning Science and Technology subjects. Because, both subjects have equal positive impacts to the pupils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60165975104 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75229188521 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647302904564 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4417145624 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215299018641 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794067757273 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093932499157 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163118132302 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106948479996 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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