There is no denying of the fact that the most successful people are having the qualities of effectively organizing their work and keep their surroundings neat and clean. According to some people, organizing things and keeping them in the right place at home and the workplace is of paramount importance. I accord with this opinion because there are a plethora of benefits if these qualities are habituated to us.
To start with, being organized will help to focus on what we want to achieve. For example, many people do multi-tasking in their day-to-day life. Hence, they maintain a to-do list to plan their day to effectively manage multiple tasks. This systematic activity not only helps people to visualize the situations but also help in making better decisions in case of any unexpected events.
Furthermore, many professional nowadays are not able to manage their work-life balance. For instance, consider software working professionals who work for long working hours. They will be tried by the time they reach home and therefore they are less enthusiastic to spend quality time with their family unless they organize their day well.
Additionally, keeping things tidy at home and the workplace will give a positive impression to the people with whom we interact and work. For example, the daily use of the laptop is susceptible to dust. If the same laptop is used for giving a presentation to the clients without cleaning then it gives a negative impression for the viewers. Also, if the home is maintained chaotic then people will have more chances of wasting time for unnecessary activities. Let us consider the general scenario where people keep their car or bike keys in irregular places and they spend hours to find it.
To sum-up, effective organizing things at work-place or home will help people in prioritizing, focusing and effectively managing the activities. Also, it helps people to unburden the stress that mounts due to the chaotic conditions.
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 78
- some people say that is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place 78
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 73
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...places and they spend hours to find it. To sum-up, effective organizing things a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12693498452 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79709325874 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.825953948 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4117647059 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207411987298 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071230450022 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742144531695 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128847902062 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669715501209 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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