Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities
According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction.
How far do you agree with this opinion?.
As per not past research, citizens spending extensive time on the internet, the time spending with humans is less. Few men and women thought that instead of using the Internet as a path of opening up new interaction possibilities around the world, we should be focused on the impact this is having on social interaction. I partially agree with this assertion, although extreme usage of the Internet creates eye and nerve issues, it helps humans to interact with their relatives and friends who are staying in another country.
On the one hand, excessive usage of the Internet causes health issues such as eyesight and nerve diseases. The new mobile phones are available in the market at affordable price tag further more internet charges are become cheap which encouraging citizens to use the Internet excessively. As a result, it is impacting on young generation brain, their thoughts are unpredictable. For instance, a young boy used a mobile phone for a long period of time to play the most famous game 'PUBG' over the internet after a few days he hands were frozen due to nerves problem.
On the other hand, the Internet helps most of the human begins to interact with their co-workers and family members without any struggle. By sitting at home we can use Skype to have a video call with anyone around the globe. In addition, the Internet creating more jobs in the job market few among them are food delivery and online marketing. For example, Zomato a food delivery company creating extensive jobs in the market to deliver the food any time using the internet in India. It is helping many of the young generation to support their family.
In conclusion, extreme usage of the Internet creating health issues on citizens however it is helping many of the people around the globe to have an interaction. I agree partially with Internet impacts on humans even though we cannot decline the benefits from it.
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| 2020-08-22 | ITW | 73 | view |
| 2019-04-16 | mananmatrix | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...oung boy used a mobile phone for a long period of time to play the most famous game PUBG over ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87596899225 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59567122289 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50645994832 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2032892387 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254201685153 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797455403184 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138953423082 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140473206786 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158134081192 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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