Industrial revolution of 17th century bring a historical change in the dressing discipline of worker nations. In that case numerous people asserted that employees should wear fixt outfit on work. Though uniform provide coordination and impression, but it also can be areason of filling bore. Which can effect the employee psychologically. That why partly I disagreed with the idea and I will explain my views on the base of it.
To begin with, all the rob normally not suitable for all culture and religion. Specially women have huge complain about official dress up. Like Muslim ladies like to ware abaya and Hindu ladies prepare long rub instead of official attire. For example, in UAE women worker are permitted to ware abaya instead of uniforms. Thus, uniform is not perfect for all.
Moreover, professional attire is not appropriate for all kinds of duties. Like Banker, former, they need different dress up on the base of situation or work. Such as, former need different dresses for planting for cultivation or animal husbandry. Therefore, boarder them in a uniform can be advice able. Furthermore, young up-to-dates are willing to changing their looks according to modern fashion. In that stage they feel boring for uniform. So, uniform effect the employee psychologically too.
Nevertheless, having a professional rub is not bad idea at all because it increases the power of teamwork, bring coordination and impression on workplace. Even it makes the employee more confident and responsible for work.
In conclusion, employer should try to select attire which is suitable for all profession, culture and religion.
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. 61
- In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion of this 47
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports.Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it also can be areason of filling bore. Which can effect the employee psychologically...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n the base of it. To begin with, all the rob normally not suitable for all culture a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28076923077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88471538288 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0637672913 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.65 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318167971076 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901565297034 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719822469827 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160127668184 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450815383271 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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