In the era of technological development people are fascinated for online shopping. In that case several nations think that cause of the tremendous growth of e-shop traditional stores may close very soon. Partly, I disagreed with the idea because I strongly believe that in every cities and town's physical shops have a standard value which online shop never can take. So, on the base of that I will explain my point of views.
First of all, numerous up-to-date people like to buy for nearest shopping mall or super shops for the product quality and process of money transaction. Live shop gives us the opportunity to check the products before paying amount and normally a well-known shop always try to sell best products to their customers for keeping their reputation high. For example, daily fashion magazine 2019 published that 70% people have complain about of online shopping. Thus, still that is not possible in the case of home delivered online base seller.
Another reason is, nowadays people are not only visiting shopping mall for buying but also for spending quality times. In the modern time malls are included with play zone for kids, large food court with branded foods. Even malls are arranging different kinds of occasional setup, so that people can celebrate. For instance, recently on the daily UAE newspaper Khalij Time published that 40% of people like to be spent time in malls in their holidays. Therefore, all those never can be possible for online shop.
On the flip side, young generation think that shopping through online may be give of modernization. Moreover, they believe that in the busy life people do not have time to for shopping that is why they buy from online to save their time. To highlight, in the survey of international "Arong" 2018 report that 50% of people choose e-shopping for saving their times.
In conclusion, buying from online is a trend of modern life but traditional shops are always providing use the quality. Who prefer which one it is depend on person to person but I think online cannot be a reason of physical shop closing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'sell the best'.
Suggestion: sell the best
...ormally a well-known shop always try to sell best products to their customers for keeping...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...ine 2019 published that 70% people have complain about of online shopping. Thus, still t...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...the quality. Who prefer which one it is depend on person to person but I think online ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95750708215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56268583678 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552407932011 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4116779633 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263362779543 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868889505662 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498923880729 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160040084231 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242948325958 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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