Nowadays smoking is the most controversial issue that can effect not only the smoker but also the inner circle ever all over the society. In that case several nations suggested that country should prohibited smoking publicity. Mainly, I am agreed with the suggestion, but I also think it will put a negative impact on the economy of a country. So, I will explain my views base on it.
To begin with, smoking pays a unfair roll in our society by leading numerous diseases like lung cancer, teeth cancer, mouth cancer commonly with smoke unfairly with witness. Specially, with the children who never smoke. Moreover, with the female who may even don't like the smell of nicotine. For example, in 2012 "DMC" published that 30% of people suffering lung cancer only by the smell of smoke. Therefore, public smoke is a remarkable threat for our society.
Furthermore, tremendous increase of people smoking normally able to Croat fascination about nicotine on our young start. Basically, teenagers like to follow what they observe, as a result todays pre-observer can be tammors chain smoker. Such as, international newspaper 'Daily Star' published that 70% of young generation first try nicotine by following their near and dear from survey of 2019. Thus, prohibiting public smoke is essential for saving our proven star.
Nevertheless, government should allow Smoking openly because it can negatively effect on some business like bars, night clubs. Without that, country will loss the Tax money from cigarettes. To highlight, UAE country head out 200% Tax on cigarettes and alcohol in 2018.
In conclusion, health is wealth, so we should not compromise with it. As we cannot stop buying and selling of cigarettes, but we should aware about the harmful side of it because it is inappropriate for our health and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1644295302 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73786227279 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7188860562 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230438714691 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728975777729 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516990448645 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109023817663 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496997433627 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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