Nowadays fashion has become a part of our modern Life. In that case myriad nation asserted that people outfit represent their culture, believe as well as characteristics. Partly I agree with the topic but I also believe that only fashion sense can not be a mirror of any one personality. So, I will explain my both point of views.
First of all, new people are excited to change their costumes more for fashion and comfort than culture. Fashion houses are also make cloth on the base of weather and demand day by day easy wearing, light and comfortable dresses is increasing rather than cultural outfits. For example, T-shirt is most popular easy, comfortable,light costume all over the world. 70 percent of nation without gender discrimination like T-shirt source of National Fashion magazine 2018.Moreover, in the rapid growth of globalization most of the young generation connected with technology social media, internet for flowing new fashion, trend, lifestyle. In that reason it's become impossible to hold dress up in a cultural boundary. Such as , new people are interested about online shopping more than shopping mall.
On the other side, every society has their own style of clothing which is completely related with their culture. If any one wear all that outfit international it possible to represent their culture. For highlight, for introducing the culture of Nigeria still they PM wear their traditional costume in the seminar of European Union. One more point can be added that, any multinational country you will get at least one person behind you who is comfortable with cultural outfit.
In conclusion, I want to tell that nation should follow style with the awareness of their own culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75899105015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3756249943 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132988451081 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041839492533 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033034185466 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710809403615 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334943896808 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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